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The Devils Necklace - 12/12/2012 3:26:29 PM

JazzH95

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Please have a look at my trailer as i am a amateur trailer producer - Please provide feedback on ways to improve the trailer

Watch The Devils Necklace Trailer Here

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RE: The Devils Necklace - 12/12/2012 3:29:12 PM

JazzH95

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This seems really effective and professional because you have used one main character which helps the audience identify her. Good job buddy

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RE: The Devils Necklace - 12/12/2012 3:30:59 PM

JazzH95

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i got fed up of seeing the same person over and over again... the continuous use of the same character which is really irritating - if i was out of 10 i would give it a 7/10 - the use of sound is really good especially over the montage

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RE: The Devils Necklace - 12/12/2012 3:32:57 PM

JazzH95

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overall the trailer is very good however i think you should work on the lighting of some shots you have used for example the establishing shot, however i feel the story line works well in relation to the title which makes me want to go and see it... although i do feel you gave a bit too much of the story away the way it has been structured

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RE: The Devils Necklace - 12/12/2012 4:17:21 PM

elab49

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Is it that you're all sitting in the same PC room using the same computer so you don't realise you're signing in and talking to each other?

Have you considered, eg, sitting in a classroom, showing your vids. and discussing it there amongst yourselves? Given most of you are on the same course.

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RE: The Devils Necklace - 12/12/2012 4:39:53 PM

Willie Mayes Hayes

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Re-title this post "Diary of a breakdown"

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RE: The Devils Necklace - 13/12/2012 1:51:15 AM

kiranbeauchamp

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Hows about u comment on the trailer instead of chatin shit? Weird guy

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RE: The Devils Necklace - 13/12/2012 6:58:43 AM

elab49

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I assume you mean your classmate - the one talking to himself?

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RE: The Devils Necklace - 13/12/2012 11:20:35 AM

Willie Mayes Hayes

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I am Jack's Empire account

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