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Street riders - 11/12/2012 10:47:23 PM   
JSodha

 

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This is a movie trailer that was produced for my media coursework. If you could please comment and give your comments and critisism. will be much appreciated thank you.
If you could comment on the costumes, locations, sound, lighting, and representation and tell me what you think is good and what could be done better.


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RE: Street riders - 13/12/2012 11:50:37 AM   
JSodha

 

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Brilliant variation of shots and the soundtrack is amazing. The representation needs some work. I can see your targetin males but i think the use of some female sexuality might help to boost the target audience. The lighting needs some work in some sections of the trailer like at the end with the scenes that are in the dark. overall a really good trailer though.

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RE: Street riders - 13/12/2012 11:52:29 AM   
JSodha

 

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You need to work on the lighting as some of the lighting is quite poor and cant't really see what is going on in some of the scenes. Ned some work on the characters in the trailer as well as there should be some females in the trailer to help encourage the male audience more

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RE: Street riders - 13/12/2012 11:53:44 AM   
JSodha

 

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Not a bad trailer but need to work on the narrative of it as I can't really pin point what is happening in the movie as only one aspect of the biking is being shown. What about the rest of the narrative?

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