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My movie trailer - 27/11/2012 10:02:34 AM

sunjay5

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I am making a trailer for my A2 media coursework, and i would really appreciate some feedback on specific areas of my trailer such as sound, camera angles representation and narrative. Thank you.

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RE: My movie trailer - 7/12/2012 11:27:14 AM

sunjay5

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I really think this is a great piece of work, you have a great storyline and as soon as i watched it i understood everything that was happening, however i would say that the use of sound could do with a bit more work on as it has an almost muffled sound at 9 seconds in. Also the characters are changing outfits all the time in each scene so it should be kept a bit more consistent. But, never the less the soundtrack is really good as it is quite hard to find a person who will make you a track like that. Also the mise on scene is represented well as it is mostly featured in an estate, which is a typical location convention for a social realism movie.

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RE: My movie trailer - 11/12/2012 9:19:06 AM

sunjay5

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this work really is great, i love it

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