Rgirvan44
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Joined: 10/3/2006 From: Punishment Park
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ORIGINAL: jobloffski How much better would Nemesis have been if the ending had panned out as... We can't stop him. We're practically dead in the water. We have no weapons. There's nothing we can do. Except ram his ship with ours, saving the earth, but killing us all in the process. Thereby becoming Shinzon's Nemesis by being his opposite. Sacrificing ourselves for a greater good, for people who may never even know we did it. And by doing so, send him to hell full of shame, that his actions were entirely driven by self pity. With mucho meanginful glances between characters, who don't actually want to die, but they will follow their Captain, to death, the final frontier. That may well be the cheesiest post I've ever typed, but, it would still have been a mother of an ending. There are several easy changes you can make to the movie to make it work - Have Shinzon be against the Romunlans themselves and not Picard. Make it Picards mission to stop him destroying an Empire while also struggling with this impulsive man of action who believes in the sword rather than the pen. Not evil, just not who Picard is. That removes some of the Khanseque pieces of the film and puts a new spin on things. - B4. No, no, no, no. If they must insist on this, have it be Lore, Datas evil brother. Make him the puppet master behind Shinzon. Another play on the idea of opposites. It is Lore who created Shinzon, it is Lore who introduced this tatical genuis to the Reman, and it is Lore who trained Shinzon in how to fight. Again, a role reversal. In that relationship, Lore is the boss. - Make the Romulans more of a presence in the film. Have them come to the Federation for help, maybe have the attacks happen around the Netrual Zone. - Sacrfice Data and keep him dead. Have Lore betray Shinzon in the final moments. One robot leaves, the other gives their life. A mirror of each android and who they are. - Have Riker on another ship. He and Troi don't add much to the movie, and their subplot could be removed. Have him arrive later in the film, like the Falcon coming to the rescue. - No car chase. These are just some ideas I have on the cuff, but it would help to make a richer film I believe.
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